Monday, January 30, 2017

Chancelor Rowe

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Snow-covered Trees

  




2 comments:

  1. It was a very interesting story I really like the way you told it and explained it.And the way you put everything in detail.

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  2. I liked how you were having fun with your family. Your essay has a few points where it doesn't flow like it should, but if you were to change some of the words i'm sure that it would be fixed. For example, " I grabbed as many snowballs as possible and started throwing them at them" paragraph 2. Other than the not flow of some parts of your essay, it is really good.

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