1) Click New Post (upper right hand corner). 2) Type YOUR NAME in the Post field. 3) Upload (or copy and paste) a painting that reflects your essay. Include the title (italics) and the artist's name in the caption. 4) Type your essay's title in the field with your painting. Click the link button (looks like a chain). It will ask for a web address. Go to your Google doc; click Share, and get the shareable link. Return to blog post. Paste link in the field.
You did a great job with adding dialogue throughout your essay. Maybe add in some of the experiences with your aunt at her job. In paragraph one last sentence you should change "I feel I push on my foot." to "I feel a push on my foot."
I thought it was an interesting story, it had good diction, and there were no spelling or punctuation errors. Everything looked good.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job with adding dialogue throughout your essay. Maybe add in some of the experiences with your aunt at her job. In paragraph one last sentence you should change "I feel I push on my foot." to "I feel a push on my foot."
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