1) Click New Post (upper right hand corner). 2) Type YOUR NAME in the Post field. 3) Upload (or copy and paste) a painting that reflects your essay. Include the title (italics) and the artist's name in the caption. 4) Type your essay's title in the field with your painting. Click the link button (looks like a chain). It will ask for a web address. Go to your Google doc; click Share, and get the shareable link. Return to blog post. Paste link in the field.
I like your story, I would love for you to use move details. Go back to paragraph one, and two and look at your wording twords the ending. In paragraph one you said "I can just think about Coach Fordham yelling at me”come on push it." Space out your wording twords the ending." You said in the begining of paragrph. "I wanted them to think as me as a person." I think tou should have said "I wanted them to think of me as a person."
I like your story, I would love for you to use move details. Go back to paragraph one, and two and look at your wording twords the ending. In paragraph one you said "I can just think about Coach Fordham yelling at me”come on push it." Space out your wording twords the ending." You said in the begining of paragrph. "I wanted them to think as me as a person." I think tou should have said "I wanted them to think of me as a person."
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