Monday, January 30, 2017

Sequonte' Burdette

... fell down damage broken
Bike wreck 

2 comments:

  1. Check for punctuation errors. You may need to explain more of what when on in your story. I like your qoute "think before u act."

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  2. My aunt came picked me up and took me home.You should fix this sentence. “GET OUT THE WAY”!. I think you did good with the quotation marks. What kind of pain were you in.

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