Monday, January 30, 2017

Hannah Cole

Image result for painting of mom and child

2 comments:

  1. I liked how you tell about the bond that you and you mother have. Maybe you could explain what your life was like when you moved in with your grandparents. Check page one for spelling errors

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  2. I liked how your story was personal and you we're comfortable telling about it. You put an extra comma on one of the words/ incorrect comma, but other than that you did great.

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