Tuesday, January 31, 2017

Ashley Brown

The last Christmas

2 comments:

  1. I love your essay and that you are strong enough to write about the death of your mother.My mother also passed April 26,2014 so I can understand how it feels. My question is how did you feel experiencing this moment. Maybe there should be a little more detail about your emotions.

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  2. I liked your essay and i'm sorry for your lost.
    How do you feel as of now?
    You should check your grammar.

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