Thursday, January 26, 2017

Jamal L. Fuller


Vacation Beach Retreat

2 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed the description you gave of the beach and your love for Jesus Christ.

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  2. You sound so genuine when talking about Jesus and that really helps the reader to connect and understand what you are saying. Only in a few places, i saw where you should add commas but overall, it was very progressive and i love the word choice and imagery :)

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