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I like how you said you would check with the teacher next time someone tells you to do something. Maybe they told you that you could leave because they know you usually don't leave without permission. There wasn't really anything you need to correct.
I love the lesson you taught with this story. I like some of the descriptive words you used, "grudgingly". I think it would have been better if you added more dialogue to the conversation you had with Coach Cole. Was everyone in the class except for those 3 people sitting down or up and leaving like you all did?
I like how you said you would check with the teacher next time someone tells you to do something. Maybe they told you that you could leave because they know you usually don't leave without permission. There wasn't really anything you need to correct.
ReplyDeleteI love the lesson you taught with this story. I like some of the descriptive words you used, "grudgingly". I think it would have been better if you added more dialogue to the conversation you had with Coach Cole. Was everyone in the class except for those 3 people sitting down or up and leaving like you all did?
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