1) Click New Post (upper right hand corner). 2) Type YOUR NAME in the Post field. 3) Upload (or copy and paste) a painting that reflects your essay. Include the title (italics) and the artist's name in the caption. 4) Type your essay's title in the field with your painting. Click the link button (looks like a chain). It will ask for a web address. Go to your Google doc; click Share, and get the shareable link. Return to blog post. Paste link in the field.
I liked how you explained the process you went through over the years. Maybe you could give more detail on your mothers and grandmothers veiws of everything. I would like to see more info on how you are curtainly doing.
I really really loved your story! You made great transitions and I really felt your emotions as you went through getting your implant. Did you ever feel like not getting the implant would have been easier than getting it and having to go to therapy so long? In paragraph 1, last sentence, instead of saying "My mom, and my grandmother, They..." maybe put,My mom and grandmother took me to therapy every week.
I liked how you explained the process you went through over the years. Maybe you could give more detail on your mothers and grandmothers veiws of everything. I would like to see more info on how you are curtainly doing.
ReplyDeleteI really really loved your story! You made great transitions and I really felt your emotions as you went through getting your implant. Did you ever feel like not getting the implant would have been easier than getting it and having to go to therapy so long? In paragraph 1, last sentence, instead of saying "My mom, and my grandmother, They..." maybe put,My mom and grandmother took me to therapy every week.
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