Tuesday, January 24, 2017

Leslie Seiffert

The Jumpsuit
Mohammed Joha, Freedom
Mohammed Joha, Freedom,

20 comments:

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  3. I like how you used direct quotation; I also liked your phrase "healthy girl." Maybe you could explain what the Goodyear Blimp is for readers who don't know. Check page two for omitted words.

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  4. I like how you use direct quotations: I also liked your phrase "healthy girl"Maybe you could explain what the good year blimp is for readers who don't know. Check page two for omitted words.

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  6. I liked how you used direct quotations; I also liked your phrase "healthy girl." Maybe you could explain what the goodyear blimp is for readers who don't know. Check page two for omitted words.

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  10. I like how you used direct quotations, I also liked your phrase "healthy girl." Maybe you could explain what the Goodyear blimp is for readers for who don't know. Check page two for omitted or left out words.

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  11. I like how you used direct quotations; I also like your phrase "healthy girl". Maybe you could explain what the goodyear blimp is for readers who don't know. Check page two for omitted words.

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  12. I like how you used direct quotations; I also liked your phrase 'healthy girl'. Maybe you could explain what the goodyear blimp is for readers who don't know . Check paige 2 for omitted or left out words

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  13. I like how u used direct quotations;I also liked your phrase "healthy girl." Maybe you could explain what the Goodyear blimp is for readers who don't know. check page two for omitted words.

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  18. I like how you used direct quotations, and I also like the phrase "healthy girl." Maybe you could explain what a goodyear blimp is for readers who don't know. Check page two for omitted or left out words.

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  19. I like how you used direct quotation; I also liked your phrase "healthy girl." Maybe you could explain what the Goodyear Blimp is for readers who don't know. Check page two for omitted words.

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