Tuesday, January 31, 2017

Mya Allen

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2 comments:

  1. When your Aunt bucked her eyes and said "don't be fussing and fighting".

    Fix the first sentence in the second paragraph.

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  2. You did a good job at making your story interesting with all the funny qoutes.Do you think you did a good job with your grammar? Do you think you should try to make your paragraphs flow into the next a little better.

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