1) Click New Post (upper right hand corner). 2) Type YOUR NAME in the Post field. 3) Upload (or copy and paste) a painting that reflects your essay. Include the title (italics) and the artist's name in the caption. 4) Type your essay's title in the field with your painting. Click the link button (looks like a chain). It will ask for a web address. Go to your Google doc; click Share, and get the shareable link. Return to blog post. Paste link in the field.
I liked how you gave great detail about the hospital and the funeral. Some readers would also like to know how old she was. On page one there is a few omitted words in some of your sentences. I'm sorry for your loss...
I really appreciated how your essay is very detailed and emotional. What made you want to write such an emotional essay about your personal experience? In paragraph one, the fourth sentence should end with recovering and the fifth sentence should start with "Instead,". Also in the same sentence you should take out the comma after and. On the second page at the top, you said "honestly didn't even about how...." the contraction needs to be taken out and a word needs to be added. Read over the essay and check over.
I liked how you gave great detail about the hospital and the funeral. Some readers would also like to know how old she was. On page one there is a few omitted words in some of your sentences. I'm sorry for your loss...
ReplyDeleteI really appreciated how your essay is very detailed and emotional. What made you want to write such an emotional essay about your personal experience? In paragraph one, the fourth sentence should end with recovering and the fifth sentence should start with "Instead,". Also in the same sentence you should take out the comma after and. On the second page at the top, you said "honestly didn't even about how...." the contraction needs to be taken out and a word needs to be added. Read over the essay and check over.
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